domingo, 15 de marzo de 2015

Writing task 3: An article for a magazine

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1. Before you write

Take a minute to read the task (instructions) carefully and decide what to write and in which style.

Ask yourself the following questions

What do I have to write about? (Content/ check task)
Who is the article for? A newspaper, a formal magazine/ a blog...? (To decide on style/check task)
How many paragraphs am I going to write? (Organisation)
What kind of language should I use? (Language/grammar I am expected to use/ check task)


2. While you write

Have into consideration that articles have two main purposes, to inform and to entertain/interest the reader. Ideally after going through your text, your readers should have the feeling that they have learnt something or at least that they have had a good time.

It is always a good idea to start the article with an inviting title and a riveting introduction. Something that makes your public continue reading. It could be a question (that they will only be able to answer after reading the text), or something intended to caputure the reader´s imagination. You are free to be creative when choosing a title but make sure it reflects what the text is about.

As you write remember to stick to your plan, check that you are truly answering the task questions and that you have clear well-organised coherent paragraphs (You shouldn´t start writing about A and end up writing about Z.)

At C1 level it is also of vital importance to include some advanced examples of the use of grammar as well as lexis (idioms, collocations, sayings.) So instead of saying something like "I had a lot of fun although I don´t normally enjoy jazz concerts" say something like " I had a whale of a time although jazz concerts are not my cup of tea" (idioms: have a whale of a time; not my cup of tea.)

3 After you write

Take your time to proofread. Check for spelling mistakes and see if you have to make any corrections. Make sure that you have used a wide variety of words and if you find one that has been used more than once, replace it for a synonym. 

Avoid repetition: Don´t say "I like history programmes, I also like music programmes." 
Say: "I´m into history programmes and I also like music Tv shows."

Ask yourself the following questions:
- Have I completed the task? (Content)
- Is my article well-organised? (Organisation)
- Have I used a wide range of vocabulary? (Language)
- Have I used different grammar tenses? (Language)
- Is all the article writen in the same style? (Style)
- Is the article interesting enough? (Reader)

What is the difference between an article and an essay?
As I see it, an essay is more academic, usually written for a university/college class. An article is usually for a magazine or a blog, they can be formal or informal, the topics can be serious or trivial, they are intented to inform and also to entertain.


Linking Words And Phrases
Personal opinion:In my opinion/view, To my mind, To my way of thinking, I am convinced that, It strikes me that, It is my firm belief that, I am inclined to believe that, It seems to me that. As far as I am concerned, I think that the economic recession of the previous decade was foreseeable.
To list advantages and disadvantages:One advantage of, Another advantage of, One other advantage of, A further advantage of, The main advantage of, The greatest advantage of. The first advantage of riding a motorbike in a large metropolis is that of not getting caught in major congestion.
To list points:Firstly, First of all, In the first place, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally. To start/begin with, we have to address the inadequacies within the education system before we can tackle unemployment fully.
To add more points to the same topic:What is more, Furthermore, Apart from this/that, In addition (to this), Moreover, Besides (this),… not to mention the fact that your choice of career is a fundamental decision which will influence the rest of your life. Not only is your choice of career a fundamental decision, but it is also one that will influence the rest of your life.Your choice of career is both a fundamental decision and something that will influence the rest of your life.
To refer to other sources:With reference to, According to the latest scientific research, the use of mobile phones can be damaging to one's health in the long run.
To emphasise a point:Indeed, Naturally, Clearly, Obviously, Of course, Needless to say, the scheme was hound to fail due to insufficient funds.
To give examples:For instance, For example, by establishing day-care centres across the country, working mothers can he encouraged to resume their careers. By providing incentives such as, like day-care centres working mothers are encouraged to resume their careers. If working mothers are to resume their careers then the provision of incentives particularly, in particular, especially day-care centres is essential.
To state other people's opinion:It is popularly believed that, People often claim that, It is often alleged that, Some people argue that, Many argue that, Most people feel that, Some people point out that wealth will bring happiness. Contrary to popular belief, wealth does not necessarily bring happiness.
To conclude:Finally, Lastly, All in all, Taking everything into account/consideration, On the whole, All things considered, In conclusion, On balance, For the above mentioned reasons, Therefore I feel that, To sum up, it is unlikely that there will be peace in all the countries of the world concurrently.
Summarising:In short, Briefly. To put it briefly, his performance on stage was fantastic!

Task: An article for a magazine (220-260 words)
You see the following announcement in an international magazine.
Have you had an exciting or unusual holiday? For example, sailed anywhere interesting, gone rock climbing or walked through unusual countryside? If you have, write us an article and tell us about it, explaining why you enjoyed it. We will publish the most interesting asrticles!
Write your article.

Some videos & tips on the discussion at the speaking part (II)





You'll also be encouraged to use the pictures given to help your discussion. You can get ideas from the CAE videos here:





Some videos & tips on the discussion at the speaking part (I)

Here you are a set of videos to help you face the discussion. In it you'll have to use the questions to talk about a topic.
Here are some videos, tips & useful expressions in CAE-based samples:




viernes, 6 de marzo de 2015

Writing task 2: A story (Adv. 2 + C1)

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Introduction and tips (Writing stories)

- ANSWER THE QUESTION
- PLAN your story.
- REVISE your story to correct mistakes.
- Give your story a title.
- Make sure you have at least 4 paragraphs.
- Paragraph 1 – background information.
- Paragraphs 2 and 3 the main part of the story.
- Paragraph 4 – EITHER the climax or key moment of the story OR what happened after the climax.
- Don't change the words you are given at all.
- Read the words you are given carefully. Sometimes you can choose whether to start or finish with the words. At other times you have no choice.
- Use past continuous for background information. For example – It was raining heavily as we left the house….
- Use past perfect before the main events of the story. but Anne had kindly lent me her umbrella.
- Use simple past for the main events. There wasn't a single person on the street.
- Try to include some direct speech.
- You can use contraction (haven't, couldn't etc). But a story should not be as informal as an email to a friend, for example.

Useful phrases (Writing stories)

Time phrases:
- It all began
- Shortly afterwards
- Meanwhile
- Not long afterwards
- Some time later
- Later that day
- A little later
- Finally
- In the end
- Eventually
Phrases for dramatic effect:
- Suddenly
- All of a sudden
- Without warning
- Out of the blue
- Just at that moment
- Quite unexpectedly
- As if from nowhere

Direct speech:
- “…..”, said Fred
- “…..”, shouted Fred
- “…..”, screamed Fred
- “…..”, whispered Fred
- “…..”, announced Fred.
- ”…..”, thought Fred
- “…..”, cried Fred
- “…..”, promised Fred

Concluding stories:
- When it was all over
- Looking back now
- In retrospect
- In the end
- After all that had happened

Sample questions (Writing stories)

1. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a student magazine. The story must begin with the following words.

Simon opened the door and knew immediately he had made a mistake.

Write your story in 180-220 words for in an appropriate style.

Writing task 1: A formal letter (Adv 2 + C1)

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From now on we'll try to provide you with info about the different writing tasks you could face in the writing test and some clues to overcome their inherent difficulties.

The first task will be a formal email/letter. Here you are some useful tips and a sample task:


Writing formal letters or emails
 Formal Letters
Formal letters are the most common writing task. Avoid using contractions e.g. “I´m” instead write the full words “I am”. Also avoid colloquial language.

Firstly, you begin your letter with addressing the receiver.

If the receiver is unknown:
- Dear Sir/Madam
If the receiver is known:
- Dear Miss Adams

Secondly, first sentence in the letter is about WHY you are writing, examples:
- I was extremely distressed to hear about your plans to ... (Object to someone´s plans)
- I am writing to complain about / I am writing to tell you how disappointed... (Letter of Complaint)
- I am writing to you on behalf of ... (Letter of Recommendation)
- I am writing about the article published in / I have just read your article on... (Letter to de editor)

Thirdly, during the main part of the letter you will try to connect your arguments together. Using paragraphs when appropriate, and logically connecting all of the elements in your letter using connecting words and/or sequencing:
At first / To start with/In the beginning, in addition / furthermore / moreover, firstly / secondly / lastly etc.
Then, ending phrase prior to signature (just a few suggestions):
- I look forward to hearing from you / I trust you will give my proposal your full consideration

Finally, signature is in general one of the two:
- Yours sincerely, (If you know the name of the person you sent the letter to)
- Yours faithfully, (If you started the letter with Dear Sir/Madam)



Introduction (Writing formal letters and emails)
Writing formal letters is a necessary skill that you need for your C1 writing exams.

Examples:
- You are given an article to read from a newspaper. You write to the newspaper disagreeing with the article.
- You write to complain about something.
- You write making suggestions about something.
- You write requesting information.
- You write giving information.
- You write requesting permission.

Useful phrases (Writing formal letters and emails)
a) Writing formal letters generally:
Greetings:
    - Dear Sir
    - Dear Madam
    - Dear Sir/Madam
    - Dear Mr Brown
    - Dear Ms Jones etc.

Reason for writing:
    - I am writing in response to your article/advertisement/letter
    - I am writing with regard to your article/advertisement/letter
    - I am writing regarding your article/advertisement/letter
    - I am writing on behalf of

Ending the letter:
    - I look forward to receiving your reply
    - I look forward to your reply
    - I look to hearing from you
    - I am, yours faithfully (if you don't know the name of the person you are writing to)
    - I am, yours sincerely (if you know the name of the person you are writing to)
    - Yours faithfully
    - Yours sincerely

b) Writing formal letters to complain:

Writing formal letters or emails
Reason for writing:
    - I am writing in order to complain about
    - I am writing to complain about

Introducing the complaint:
    - Firstly
    - In the first place
    - First of all
    - My first complaint is
    - The first problem is
    - The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is
    - My first concern is

Introducing further complaints:
    - Secondly
    - In the second place
    - Not only …….but also
    - In addition
    - In addition to this
    - Added to this
    - …….was also unacceptable

Demanding action:
    - I suggest that you replace the item
    - I therefore suggest that I be given a full refund
    - I would be grateful if my money was refunded
    - I would be grateful if you could give me a full refund

Ending the letter:
    - I look forward to hearing from you
    - I look forward to receiving a full refund
    - I look forward to receiving a replacement
    - I look forward to receiving your explanation

c) Writing formal letters to make suggestions:
Reason for writing:
    - I am writing to suggest
    - I am writing to arrange
    - I am writing to offer suggestions
    - I am writing make arrangements

Making first suggestion:
    - My first suggestion is
    - First of all I suggest
    - I would like to suggest

Writing formal letters or emails
Making further suggestions:
    - Another possibility is
    - A further possibility is
    - I further suggest
    - I would further suggest
    - Secondly

Offering a choice:
    - Would you therefore mind choosing between ….?
    - Either……or
    - You might choose either ……. or

d) Writing formal letters to request information
Reason for writing:
    - I am writing to receive further information about
    - I am writing to enquire about
    - I am writing to receive more detailed information about
    - I am writing to receive further details about

Requesting first piece of information:
    - The first thing I would like to know is
    - First of all I would like to know
    - I wonder if you would mind telling me first of all ….?

Requesting further information:
    - Could you also tell me….?
    - Could you also inform me ….?
    - Would you also mind informing me ….?
    - Would you also mind telling me ….?
    - Do you know ….?
    - I would also like to know if
    - I would also like to know whether
    - I hope you might also let me know about …

Thanking for information:
    - I would like to thank you in advance for this information
    - Thanking you in advance for this information
    - Thanking you in advance

Writing formal letters or emails
e) Writing formal letters to give information:
Reason for writing:
    - I am writing to inform you about
    - I am writing to provide you with information about
    - I am writing to let you know that

Providing first point:
    - The first thing I would like to inform you of is
    - The first thing I would like to tell you is
    - The first thing I wish to inform you of is
    - I would like to begin by informing you

Providing further points:
    - I would also like to let you know that
    - I would also like to inform you that
    - You might also find the following information useful
    - It might also be useful for you to know that
    - Another piece of information that might be useful

Ending the letter:
    - If you require further information, please do not hesitate to as
    - If I can be of further assistance, please do not hesitate to ask
    - I will willingly provide further information on request
    - I am at your disposal should you require further information
    - I am at your disposal should you need further assistance
    - Please do not hesitate to ask should you require further information

f) Writing formal letters to request permission
Reason for writing:
    - I am writing to ask permission to
    - I am writing to ask permission for
    - I am writing to request permission to
    - I am writing to request permission for
    - I am writing to ask if I might

Making first request:
    - Firstly I wonder if you would
    - First of all I wonder whether you would mind
    - The first request I would like you to consider is

Making further requests:
    - I would be grateful if you would also consider
    - I wonder if it might be possible for me to
    - I would also like to request permission for
    - I would also like to request permission to

Thanking for permission
    - Many thanks for kindly considering my requests
    - Thank you for considering my requests
    - I am writing to request permission to
    - I am writing to request permission for
    - I am writing to ask if I might

Making first request:
    - Firstly I wonder if you would
    - First of all I wonder whether you would mind
    - The first request I would like you to consider is

Making further requests:
    - I would be grateful if you would also consider
    - I wonder if it might be possible for me to
    - I would also like to request permission for
    - I would also like to request permission to

Thanking for permission
    - Many thanks for kindly considering my requests
    - Thank you for considering my requests


TASK PROPOSAL


LETTER OF REQUEST

You are an international student in New Zealand and your course is about to finish. You have been offered a job with a local company, which you accepted, but are no longer available on the start date you agreed with the company. Write a letter to the company to:
  - explain the reason you are not available
  - reassure them of your commitment
  - propose a solution